Ohh, wow, I only discovered you had an original story, and it's breathtakingly pretty! The characters are gorgeously drawn, the lineart's clean, and the dialogue's adorable! "Lalala, still using my soul, lalala" Despite having skulls for faces, these guys are remarkable expressive - that takes skill! c:
Naaah, you should be looking into My Chemical Romance. I hear they did a concert in Hogsmead and a goffick vampire satanist and Draco Malfoy went to mosh there.